Week 9 Online Critique

The following works are playing with vague ideas of liminality and blurring time and spatial awareness. How could I better articulate these ideas within my painting?

Feedback:

• intriguing mix between calmness and chaos in the paintings

• fractal look of nature

• when thinking about liminality concepts of time come to mind, the red painting has a slow sense of time

• immateriality of paint

• think about the work rather than the ideas - thinking backwards

• close up nature photography as a reference point - looking at textures, colours etc